Light Eater, Page 6 redo

This was the page I've least liked so far in Light Eater...it just felt too bland somehow to me...it didn't feel like it belonged, even if it was comprised primarily of close-ups, to the baroque, romanticized, rococco-sugar fest that was being imagined by a young girl. Aside from being bland, it also felt as though their was something about the space was ambiguous.

So I just said, hmmm...how can I make this feel like it fit in a bit better. The gold bars running through the fake marble seemed like it might be a good way to define the space better (Even though technically, considering what I presented as the church in page 2 this type of thing shouldn't exist.)

Anyway, much happier with this revised version.

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